I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka pai, good work sharing your descriptive writing Mahanah. I like how you described the whale's size in relation to yourself. I wonder what other adjectives you could add?
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Ka pai, good work sharing your descriptive writing Mahanah. I like how you described the whale's size in relation to yourself. I wonder what other adjectives you could add?
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