I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Mahana, You have written a very clear summary of the story. Well done and I think the message you have identified from the story is very important to keep in mind. We need to have confidence in our own selves. Ka Pai Mahana.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Mahana,
ReplyDeleteYou have written a very clear summary of the story. Well done and I think the message you have identified from the story is very important to keep in mind. We need to have confidence in our own selves. Ka Pai Mahana.
Hi Mahana I really like your summary about Carla's sandwich it's cool smart &
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keep up the good work. your friend jordan.
Thank you Jordan for the great comment
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