I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
nice might need to add some more nouns and i suggest you that you focuse more on the detail were the might take part in the storie its a great starting i think i really like yours alot!!
Kia ora Mahanah Thank you for sharing your evaluations of the characters in How to Speak Spook. I like how you have grouped them based on the ratings you gave them. What is the main thing that happens in Donald's storyline?
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nice might need to add some more nouns and i suggest you that you focuse more on the detail were the might take part in the storie its a great starting i think i really like yours alot!!
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ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your evaluations of the characters in How to Speak Spook. I like how you have grouped them based on the ratings you gave them. What is the main thing that happens in Donald's storyline?