I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Mahanah, thank you for sharing your descriptive writing. I love how you have used your senses to describe the scene and made connections to what poppies symbolise. Can you think of any similes or personification to describe the poppies?
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Kia ora Mahanah, thank you for sharing your descriptive writing. I love how you have used your senses to describe the scene and made connections to what poppies symbolise. Can you think of any similes or personification to describe the poppies?
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