I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
The graphics was great because you used the German flag throughout the blog. It was interesting to learn that Germany was the first country that made beer. Maybe use larger fonts.
Kia ora Mahana, thank you for sharing this information about Germany and the Olympics. I agree with Tawhiri, the flag is a great choice of background. Next time I would like you to double check for any missing full stops.
Tena koe Mahanah, Its Ruqayat your class mate. I really like your report about Germany. I think it is very informative and you have provided splendid information. I also like the complimentary colours you added. I just that you proofread before you post. Ka pai!
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The graphics was great because you used the German flag throughout the blog.
ReplyDeleteIt was interesting to learn that Germany was the first country that made beer.
Maybe use larger fonts.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Mahana, thank you for sharing this information about Germany and the Olympics. I agree with Tawhiri, the flag is a great choice of background. Next time I would like you to double check for any missing full stops.
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ReplyDeleteTena koe Mahanah, Its Ruqayat your class mate. I really like your report about Germany. I think it is very informative and you have provided splendid information. I also like the complimentary colours you added. I just that you proofread before you post. Ka pai!
ReplyDeleteYours truly ~
Ruqayat